awaiting their will
"... The wind blows chill across the open sill as I await their will do they understand it was my land I had to take a stand their words were crude they took my food and threatened my brood I stood...
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I'm not sure I understand this one, Rg. Is it about someone reading a book?
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yes, it is actually the forum picture of the books on the table. I imagined a scene that would put them there.
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I added the quotes to the first part... does it work better now?
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Is all the bit in quotes what's being read from the book, or the content of the book? It confuses me because it keeps mentioning 'I', which throws me somewhat.
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Btw, I've just paid to get rid of the ads. If anyone else want to contribute to the pool, it'd be helpful too
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RG, I'm not sure about this one either... I at first thought it may have been a ghost speaking. Matt, how much does it cost to keep the adds away?
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I will add a introductory verse before the quotes.. Just thinking on how to do that.
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